Friday, May 21, 2010

Penning Something (Part II)

I'm gonna do away with the pre-chorus. So the chorus will be:

I can't live live live
Live without you
I can't breathe breathe breathe
Breathe without you
Now you take away my love
You take away my happy

I can't see see see
See without you
I can't think think think
Think without you
Now you take away my soul
You take away my hope

And I'm empty

(...to be continued)

Time to think of the second verse and the bridge. And the title of the song will be "Empty". :)